Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

It is undeniable that the healthcare sector is the crucial sector for government to manage and many advocates that

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should be available at no

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and few feel that the authority will fail to provide the latest medical services. I would argue that

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medical responsibility is the fundamental right of everyone and should be made available at no

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. The main reason why I support

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free medical

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is, everyone in society is not financially capable to take

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of their health issues timely.

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, which may invite serious fitness concerns. When medical

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is available at no

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it will be approachable to everyone

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all health issues will be dealt

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a strong and healthy nation.

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, the government collects taxes from the public and

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money should be spent on the welfare of the society at large and making medical services accessible to people at no

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is the best way to do

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, those who are of the view that making medical facilities free will be of no or less use of taxpayers money,

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may think because of corruption and other unethical practices. and the same funds can be invested in education or cultural activities

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. Considering the many reasons in favour of free medical

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. Authority should take the responsibility for better education, cultural

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many urge the government to put money

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education and cultural activities,

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strongly affirm that the medical facilities should be available and accessible to everybody at no

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