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More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is increasingly popular for buyers to purchase items like clothes, vehicles and other commodities from renowned brands. From my perspective, the reasons why
this
 problem has occurred and its effects will be discussed in
this
 essay.
This
 issue is attributable to some following factors.
To begin
 with, if customers have money and they are finding a trustable brand, obviously they will choose the famous brands. To be more explicit, The well-known brands have a
long lasting
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 stand in the trading market due to the quality and uniqueness of products.
Moreover
, using expensive commodities can represent their wealth and positions in society. It means that they get high-paying jobs and,
therefore
, they can afford to pay for luxury items. The adverse outcomes of
this
 problem have been and will
severe
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 in the future.
First
 and foremost, middle-class people are willing to spend a great deal of money on
the
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costly commodities which might be three times more than the average monthly salary while they can own the same products
with
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 much lower prices.
As a result
, they will be at risk of facing
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financial problems.
Last
 but not least, people have an inclination to focus on what others wear or how much the items cost but do not care what he or she can achieve in their career. In summary, it is evident that there are some causes of shopping for branded products whose effects are devastating.
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