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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It has been a long discussion of what is the best option
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 if accept bad
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 and one of the main objectives in life,
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 grow up and study or work, is
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 happy; it sounds simple but it is not a goal that all people could achieve, which makes it much more desirable.
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 of money, every day counts and your life don’t stop, it would be better to try to
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improve those
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 with challenges and
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On the other hand
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 that it will not always go as expected and maybe more than an improvement it could be a step back. Overall, looking at the benefits and drawbacks of each one of the options, I would say that accept your situation does not matter if it is good or bad, would give you a clear view and based on
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 quality.
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