Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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my point of view about the subject is that

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imagine the satisfaction and disappointment that some

people

feel when they find out they are not good enough for the job they apply for,

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mean that there are certain cases that they are classified as overqualified and Over time the pain of

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that situation would make a difference in the routine of life for those who can't accept the fact that they are not working on what they tried so hard, Many

people

prepare in their studies for

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extensive part of their lives to achieve a better quality of life,

although

in the immense diversity of jobs the situations can give that fortunately or not applying it corresponds to each one of them to accept the opportunities of work that aren't well paid or that do not meet the standards or requirements that

people

or any person

apply

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for, some reasons may be that the easiest to accept that only job offer to not be without prospects.

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, there is the possibility that indicates that

people

who are more determined risk changing that bad situation and makes for better or worse a significant change with the satisfaction of achieving better situations

that is

why they should involve their entire work team to express their disagreements regarding their duties at work.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news Write at least 150 words

The Best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disage?

In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this is a positive or negative development?