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Some people believe unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a common belief that free
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 should be mandatory for high schoolers. Arguments both for and against as well as my opinion will be evaluated in
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 and the main positive point is that undergraduates develop a richer perspective of the world by attending
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 activities.
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, seeing
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-hand how animals are unfairly treated in shelters can motivate students to tackle
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, every plus has its minus. It is well known that if children are forced to do something, most likely they will not be willing to do it at all.
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, changing
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 to compulsory might lead to the loss of interest among teens. Another supporting point is by doing community
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, teens are learning essential soft skills
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 as teamwork, creativity, problem-solving and many more.
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, mastering these skills will enable future adults to succeed in a career or in building stable relationships. That said, these services are teaching scholars what general academic programs will not.
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, some of the high schoolers are already busy with sports or clubs to do
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. It might be overwhelming for undergraduates to manage a growing number of activities on their plates. To conclude, mandatory community
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 is a contradiction to the whole concept of “
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”. In my opinion, every educational must have additional community services, yet make them optional. Opportunity to choose will mean that future adults are willing to do these services by themselves and
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, do their best.
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