Topic: Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce crime rate?

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The modernization of the world contributed to the growing needs of individuals. It has been noticed that an illegal activity rate is comparatively greater in the cities than in villages.
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, the reasons behind
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are various
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as ; 1. Competitive lifestyle 2. easy availability of narcotics. It is noteworthy to say that enormous modalities are available to control crimes in the city like
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awareness, proper
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and guidance and stringent rules.
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with, it has been noticed since the ages that criminal activities are increasing day by day in the larger cities and
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and the foremost reason is, jealousy among the peers,
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to that, the readily available narcotics, alcohol and various forms of drugs which spoils the youth and indulges them into a crime.
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who are economically sound often dominates the poor individual resulting in insult of the person, ego problem and
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crime happen.
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, according to the survey conducted by The Union of the Labourers, India, in March
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2020, revealed that 59% of crimes including murder, robbery, extortion were done by household workers, to whom the employers insulted and tortured emotionally many times because of their poverty.
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the urban areas there is a trend to keep household workers and conflicts arise between the employees and the employer every now and
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leading to criminal activity.
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, there is always a solution available to whom, who seeks a better future. The government as well as the
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of urban areas can collectively work on
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crucial issue in order to make the city safe and peaceful. The government can implement strict rules and regulations for the use of narcotics. The
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can form groups of motivators and supportive persons who can help the poor to enhance their financial conditions by creating awareness about
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and employment and to abandon the illegal modalities.
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, the article published in The Hindusthan Times on 19 June
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2020 provided information that
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a foundation called ' Shiksha
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Trust' formed by some enthusiastic and socially inclined individuals in Mumbai, helped 100 children for their
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, who were poor and living in a slum area. The results were remarkable and admirable that, 75 of them got a decent job in the various prestigious fields
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as teaching and 5 of them became doctors.
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, addressing the problem, spreading awareness and effective help to the debilitated individuals in the society can alleviate the rate of a crime. In conclusion, I believe that there is a higher rate of illegal activities in the major cities because of the lack of
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and economic differences among the
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, the problem can be solved by providing proper guidance,
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and the government's legal support.
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