Crime is becoming a serious concern. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Increasing criminal incidents are becoming

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reason to worry. One section of people

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that the

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can be

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made hard to prevent the unlawful act from

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occurring

. Whereas, others are of the opinion that it will not be of any use to stop the crime from increasing, as it is a mindset and circumstances which leads to increase in the bad doings and very little can be done to improve in

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of the public think that if the strict laws are implemented and harder actions are taken against bad people who are involved in extreme offences like sexual assaults, murders

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giving them hard

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like death sentence would set a right example in society so that person with think twice before attempting

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acts. The fear factor

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cases.

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, a study was done recently on various countries where we have capital

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life threatening

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offences versus countries where

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there

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is there. And it was found that

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where there is capital

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, where there is capital punishment,

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in place,

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have gone down from the time it was implemented. have got

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opinion about

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. They think that offenders are not born as they are.

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and mindset developed over time

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to being involved in the bad acts.

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when they are in the process of attempting

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unlawful act, they are actually are not afraid of being caught or about

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they may get. So, very little can be done to ensure we have control over everybody's

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or the thought process. There was a survey done on

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of prisoners across the nation was asked about whether they were aware or thought about

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of their

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of them said they just got carried away by the

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and was not even remotely thinking about the price they will have to pay. In conclusion, while I take both

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views into account, I am a firm believer

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implementing strict laws and spreading awareness about possible lawful

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certain common illegal

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can bring to

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peoples life. And

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improving on the ground

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by working toward prosperity is the key

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overall

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well being of society to reduce unfortunate incidents like crime.