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The table graph presents information about types of families in Australia, who were poor, and the
number
of
people
for each family, in 1999. Overall, it is noticeable that the most
proportion
of
poverty
was sole parent, while an aged
couple
had just a percentage of the poor at the lowest.
To begin
with, the
number
of the aged couples was about 50 thousand, which had the least percentages at 4%, and there was the
proportion
for couples without
children
, 19%, which the
number
of them had 4 times more than an aged
couple
. Apart from, the most
proportion
of
this
couple
poverty
group is
couple
with
children
, 12% which the figures for its
people
had over 4 times more than a
couple
without
children
. On the other group, 6% of single aged person was
poverty
, which had a
number
of
people
at around 55 thousand, whereas, single without
children
and sole parent was the highest
proportion
of categories at 19% and 21% respectively.
Similarly
, the
number
of sole parents and couples without
children
were closely
number
, but the
proportion
of sole parents had 3 times more than a
couple
without
children
. Eventually, All
poverty
households were 11% and the figure for
people
had approximately 2 million.
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