Write about the following topic. It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days development in
tourism
and technology increasing day by day
furthermore
, nowadays there is a huge trend in
tourism
and research in far
places
such
as the south pole.
However
, there is
a
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pros and cons of everything in
this
essay we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
traveling
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to
remote
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a remote
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natural environment. Let begin with the advantage of the visit to the eco nature.
Firstly
,
scientists
are finding new spices thereby we know about our planet more. what I mean to say, there are so many new spices, plants out there and we still don't know about them, so we gonna find about more.
For instance
, recently
scientists
found
about
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a black frog, which is unique.
this
frog
first
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time sees in the Africa jungle and
scientists
found it more
this
hybrid.
Secondly
, Nowadays
people
want to explore more. Folks are more attracted to the South pole Because there is an adventure, natural environment, fun, and quiet.
For example
, many
people
try to find quiet
places
owing to the population. now hill station ,
also
beaches have too much crowd so
people
avoid to visit there and find another place.
On the other hand
,
tourism
impact is not good in these
places
.
For Instance
, tourists make things worst for spices.
People
disturb their lifestyle
also
sometimes they harm them.
Scientists
also
do their research but that causes their natural environment. So many
places
ruined since
tourism
and
scientists
go. So for the safety of these
places
, it is
a
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virtual to not go these
places
. In conclusion,
this
development is important for us but harmful for these animals and plants for
there
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safety and protection we should not go there.
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