The majority of news is reporting bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think news should be a balance of good news and bad news?

The main part of
news
these days are always about
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semiotics
news
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wars, famines, accidents and crime.
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news
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a symmetry
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of
both
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the reason why individuals notice bad
news
more. The reason is that bad
news
means the current state is carried on or went positive which does not directly affect other people.
However
, bad
news
causes harm or threats to other people.
As a result
, more of them get to know more and more details of bad
news
.
In addition
, journalists always try to show enthusiasm and love to use exaggeration, so people can get super terrified or down about the
news
. In order to raise the benefit of the journalism industry. There is
also
one reason behind
this
, there is a phenomenon that when some of us heard about those
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semiotics
news
, they will quickly share it online and to their friends and family, so the
news
then
spreads widely which causes an increased number of us to notice bad
news
more often. Personally, I agree to make
both
sides of the
news
balance because of one main benefit.
That is
, individuals won’t get too
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optimistic
when viewing how the world is like, or getting over depressed about it. They will
then
learn, everything has
both
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down sides
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, and it is super vital to know
both
. We know what is currently improving or getting worse in the world which allows us to have our own judgement and view about all of
these
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news
. In conclusion, I do believe that negative
news
is more
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and causes more attention to the positive ones, but it is chief to be aware of those positive and negative ones and they must form an equilibrium, as
news
can hugely
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an impact on our life.
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