You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: Introduce yourself Inform him/her of the situation Request that the problem be fixed

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to make a complaint about the connection to the Internet in my room. My name is Christopher Pell and I am a law student currently residing in Elm’s Wood Halls of Residence on

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Malone Road. I am a post-graduate student currently in the latter stages of doing my Master’s dissertation. I live in the new complex in A block on the fifth floor, room 15. A few times a day, without warning, the internet connection suddenly stops and when I run the

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program on my computer it states that there is an issue with the IP address.

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is very inconvenient for me because it means that I have to stop work and go to a local coffee shop to get online. I would like it if one of your technicians could come around as soon as possible and test the line and establish the problem. Someone looked at it

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week and said that everything was fine, but it is obviously not. I pay twenty pounds a month for the line and I do not think that

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is satisfactory service. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Christopher Pell

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A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

203 words

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You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some problems with the Internet connection in your room. Write to the supervisor of your residence, in your letter: Introduce yourself Inform him/her of the situation Request that the problem be fixed

Structure your letter

Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people believe that technology has improved our lives, while others think that it has made our lives worse. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion.

Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?