Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many environmental

issues

at the present have had a negative impact on

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animal

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and

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around the

world

. Some people say that the biggest environmental issue nowadays is the

extinction

of

species

of

plants

and

animals

, while

others

say that there are other problems that are more important

issues

. In the following paragraph, both views of

this

topic will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that the

loss

of

species

of

plants

and

animals

is one of the significant problems because

plants

and

animals

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the food source of community in each region.

For example

, Turmeric which is

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in Thailand is endangered by human activities which want to make herb from Turmeric, as the result, there

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competition for the remaining

plants

.

Additionally

, the

extinction

of

plants

and

animals

can cause the

change

of balance of ecosystem

such

as the

loss

of panthers which are

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of

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environment

can lead to an increase of other

animals

that stay in the same location, for the panthers are the number one predator in the food chain. In that case, the government in Thailand is provide hunting and cutting down trees policies to reduce

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of some

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and some plant in each region of Thailand. Another reason,

extinction

of

species

can lead to the

loss

of richness in bio-diversity which can directly affect

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human living.

However

,

others

say that there have had

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important

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issues

rather than

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of

plants

and

animals

.

For instance

, climate

change

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creates unstable weather patterns causing more heatwaves, hard storms and sea levels to rise. These all impact us and the bio-diversity on earth. In that case, many people are

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with

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this

issue rather than the

loss

of

species

, and the government in some

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lessons about climate

change

to school for making children aware of the

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in the

world

and help to solve

this

problem.

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,

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environmental

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is overpopulation in big cities that can cause many cities

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as traffic congestion, pollution

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said that

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of overpopulation are the heath technology development that

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to a decrease in mortality and

a

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increase in birth.

Consequently

,

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policy is provided by the central government of China, the purpose of which was to limit the great majority of family units in China to one child each between 2015 and 2016. In conclusion, every

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environmental

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have had

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everyone around the

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.

Therefore

, it is recommended that everyone in the

world

should take

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serious actions

such

as reducing

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some activity that has

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impact

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the environment

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to reduce every

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on the earth.