Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#country #language

It is undeniable that living in foreign

countries

of human has both negative impacts and positive impacts. Some

people

believe that those

people

can

cause

serious social

problems

such

as the job competition

issue

, overpopulation

issue

, racism

issue

and

Asian

hate

issue

, while others argue that those

people

cannot

cause

such

problems

. From my point of view, I agree with

latter

Correct article usage

the latter

show examples

idea for many reasons, outlined in the following paragraph. On the one hand, some

people

think that

migration

people

who are different on languages from other

countries

to their

country

can lead to a lot of social

problems

because they think that those

people

are coming from poor

countries

to settle in their land to hope that they will become to citizens in the future. As the result, native

people

are taken over the job by foreign

people

In other words

, living in

the

Correct article usage

show examples

foreign land of

people

can lead to the job competition

issue

and the overpopulation

issue

. Another example with

Asian

hate

issue

is that some white skin

people

who settle in the USA often do not like Asians because they believe that every

Asian

people

are often stupid, and

Asian

Add an article

the Asian

show examples

country

is not exuberance

On the other hand

, others argue that living in a foreign

country

cannot

cause

serious social

problems

because the difference

Change preposition

show examples

nationalities, skins, languages and sexes are not causing social

problems

, but it is the nurture, the

environmental

Replace the word

environment

show examples

and the individual thought that

are

Change the verb form

show examples

the factors of the social

issue

causing.

Additionally

, many

people

think that

migration

of some

people

to the foreign

countries

can

cause

new knowledge which new innovations and new technologies will be developed to society.

Furthermore

, the state government in some

countries

are providing the law and the policy that can protect foreign from a social problem.

For instance

, the government of Australia is providing

Multiculturalism

Correct article usage

a Multiculturalism

show examples

idea which allows citizens in Australia to adapt

with

Change preposition

show examples

culture

Replace the word

cultural

show examples

diversity. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with

this

viewpoint because

migration

Add an article

the migration

show examples

people

to a foreign

country

can

cause

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

culture

Replace the word

cultural

show examples

diversity and new knowledge.

However

, whether

migration

the

Change the article

apply

show examples

good or

the

Change the article

apply

show examples

bad depend on

viewpoint

Add an article

the viewpoint

show examples

of each.

Submitted by kitsanayuiyui on Sat Jul 24 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

358 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
cultural assimilation

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Some authorities think that it is more favourable for pupils to begin studying languages at primary school instead of secondary school. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate that the earlier someone learns an additional language, the more likely they are to master it and that it brings added cognitive benefits, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely confusion with their native tongue, is not valid.
7
band
These days, many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical, or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this for countries that give and receive?
In this contemporary epoch, some strong nations provide assistance to weak countries by giving them food, and medications, free of cost to help them maintain stability in the nation. This scenario affects positively as well as negatively to both sender as well as receiver. This essay will delve into the reasons behind this scene and will lead to a logical conclusion as well.
5
band
Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
In this essay, I will share my view about how an advertising nowadays could influence the buyer. Some people think a product’s commercial display could highly affect the number of its buyers. However, others may say vice versa. People are no longer care about it. I strictly agree that advertisements are repeated and I do not believe it anymore as the factor of purchasing something.
6.5
band
Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field can have a negative influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
sportsmen are amongst the most famous people in society and others follow their lifestyles. some people believe that some youngsters find their life way by imitating sportsmen’s lifestyles and athletes could have a positive model in their lives. however, another group does not agree and asserts that sportsmen could have dire impacts on the youth both during their sports activities and afterward. the essay will discuss both sides and reach a conclusion.
7.5
band
Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
Physical education programs are having paramount importance in a school curriculum, therefore, there have been a number of opinions, that physical education should be compulsory because of its mental and physical health benefits for a student. However, some oppose it. I will discuss both types of opinions before a conclusion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical, or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this for countries that give and receive?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people, while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field can have a negative influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?