Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that living in foreign
countries
of human has both negative impacts and positive impacts. Some
people
believe that those
people
can
cause
serious social
problems
such
as the job competition
issue
, overpopulation
issue
, racism
issue
and
Asian
hate
issue
, while others argue that those
people
cannot
cause
such
problems
. From my point of view, I agree with
latter
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idea for many reasons, outlined in the following paragraph. On the one hand, some
people
think that
migration
of
people
who are different on languages from other
countries
to their
country
can lead to a lot of social
problems
because they think that those
people
are coming from poor
countries
to settle in their land to hope that they will become to citizens in the future. As the result, native
people
are taken over the job by foreign
people
.
In other words
, living in
the
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foreign land of
people
can lead to the job competition
issue
and the overpopulation
issue
. Another example with
Asian
hate
issue
is that some white skin
people
who settle in the USA often do not like Asians because they believe that every
Asian
people
are often stupid, and
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country
is not exuberance
On the other hand
, others argue that living in a foreign
country
cannot
cause
serious social
problems
because the difference
on
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nationalities, skins, languages and sexes are not causing social
problems
, but it is the nurture, the
environmental
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and the individual thought that
are
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the factors of the social
issue
causing.
Additionally
, many
people
think that
migration
of some
people
to the foreign
countries
can
cause
new knowledge which new innovations and new technologies will be developed to society.
Furthermore
, the state government in some
countries
are providing the law and the policy that can protect foreign from a social problem.
For instance
, the government of Australia is providing
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idea which allows citizens in Australia to adapt
with
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culture
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diversity. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with
this
viewpoint because
migration
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of
people
to a foreign
country
can
cause
the
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culture
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cultural
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diversity and new knowledge.
However
, whether
migration
is
the
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good or
the
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bad depend on
viewpoint
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the viewpoint
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of each.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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