The money spent by government on space programme would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological advancements

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enabled us to explore outer

space

for conducting research on life beyond our planet. Though it may sound beneficial for our future needs, the cost of

such

research is extremely high and it is often

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criticized

by people on the extensive use of government funds on these programmes. I completely agree that countries

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lack basic necessities

such

as educational and medical institutions should focus on resolving these essential public services rather than investing heavily

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futuristic goals.

To begin

with, Many developing nations face various difficulties in providing basic services to the public due to low Gross Domestic Product (GDP), over-population and corruption. Due to

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of these vital services the nation can face

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in-time

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in time

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of

pandemic

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.

For example

, India which is a developing country faced

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of hospitals and other medical facilities during the corona pandemic crisis. Even after conducting successful

space

programmes the country still failed to control the situation and was affected severely.

Furthermore

, adequate schools and hospitals will ensure overall growth in literacy and

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of society in the near future. It will directly help the nation

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providing more qualified individuals within the country rather than hiring experts from abroad.

This

itself will lower the cost of

space

programs that can be conducted after these basic needs are met. In Conclusion, Though many states still are under pressure of proving themselves in the

space

exploration segment mainly due to competition between neighbouring countries.

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firmly believe that the authorities should

initially

meet the demands of essential public service requirements

besides

investing

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galactic exploration