Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think they should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by many that the

university

should educate students for their future jobs. But some people think they should simply give an academic education. To my mind, while the

university

focuses on academic subjects, they should place practical

courses

into their curriculums. On the one hand, in the modern

days

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industries or companies need talented trained workers.

However

, many graduated people do not feel

themselves

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prepared for

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employment

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since they learn about just academic knowledge; resulting in a lack of practice and

thus

leading to

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a decrease

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in quality of business.

For example

, each electronic

engineers

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engineer

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must get theoretical lessons in all

semester

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such

as circuit analysis or wireless communications so their knowledge about software like Ansys used their job is not enough and sectors have to spend more time to learn

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software because of not meeting the sector’s need.

On the other hand

, theoretical subjects has

also

a crucial role

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the student’s life. They improve their analytical thinking and calculation skills not attained with practical

courses

; resulting in

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solving encountered problems by using mathematical background.

For instance

, in

economy

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, economists make use of theoretical models if they come against

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difficult or different situations.

In addition

to that, skills used in

job

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can be gained by personal effort.

Nevertheless

, picking knowledge in academic subjects up is far more awkward than lessons to practice so students always need to learn these

courses

in the

university

. In my opinion,

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does not only serve the business sector.

Therefore

,

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of

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academic lessons, students compulsorily take a subject that provides them

practicing

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for their

job

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like software or lab

courses

.

This

could be more proper for either the business or the academy. In conclusion,

although

skills used in areas of life can be attained by academic education and

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theoretical

parts is much more difficult,

practicing

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for

sector

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the sector

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in

university

is

also

important for student’s future life and industries or companies.