The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant. write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate the
road
access upgrade to a
city
hospital over 3 years (2007-2010).
Overall
, it is clearly visible that there were significant changes made to the roads
as well as
the
car
parks around
city
Correct article usage
the city
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hospital
along with
an addition of a
bus
station. In 2007, the
city
hospital had limited space in a confined
car
park used for both the staff and the public on the eastern side of Hospital
road
. On both sides of
this
fairly narrow
road
, there were several
bus
stops spaced out.
However
, massive improvements were made in 2010, with the removal of
bus
stops,
instead
Add a comma
,instead
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a
bus
station was constructed on the western side of Hospital
road
. There were 2 roundabouts introduced on both ends of Hospital roads leading to Ring
road
. The addition of a huge public
car
park on the east of
city
Correct article usage
the city
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hospital,
leaving
Wrong verb form
leaves
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more room for the previous
car
park which is now used solemnly by staff.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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