As a result of tourism an increasing number of people traveling, there is an growing demand of more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be done to prevent these problems?

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The aviation industry is expanded due to tourism because more people in the world like to travel.In
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aviation adversely
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the surroundings and what solutions
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can be taken,in order to reduce the negative impact on the
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. I have identified 3 main problems of the avian industry including air
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pollution
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and
water
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pollution
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. An aircraft's engine is functioned by fossil fuel which leads to the emission of co2 when they are running.That ultimately leads to global warming and
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to climate change and other environmental changes.
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the liquefication of the glaciers in both north and south poles.
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that is
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released to the
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have a huge impact on society, for
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the
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disrupts having a quality of sleep,badly
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the education of the children and increase the cardiovascular risk on the people. Airports tend to discard chemical products in the jet fuels
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near
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bodies which ultimately causing
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pollution
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. Some possible solutions to these problems are using alternative fuel modes, make new policies and using modern technology to reduce
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alternative fuel media's other than fossil fuels,
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,H2 and etc.. which do not produce green gas and degenerate in the
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.Government authorities should make echo friendly policies after analyzing
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and cons of the aviation industry.For
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they can propose limitations for carbon dioxide emission. The
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solution is to use
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technology by inventing a program that virtually
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the extent of the
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and auto-regulate. To conclude, expansion of tourism requires more and more
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to function and it adversely
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on the
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by increasing air,
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and
water
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pollution
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using echogenic fuels,inventing new government policies and using modern technology can overcome these issues.
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