Some people think that students should play more team sports, such as football and volleyball, rather than individual sports, such as running and swimming. Do you agree?
It appears that the word but is unnecessary in this sentence. Consider removing it.
The verb promotes does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
The word team work seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word team work seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The noun phrase student seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that student may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The singular verb attracts does not appear to agree with the plural subject any games. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It seems that level may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The word country men seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word country men seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun light in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
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