Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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INTERNET IS BECOMING POPULAR FOR ACQUIRING THE KNOWLEDGE.

HOWEVER

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, IT IS BELIEVED BY SOME PEOPLE SCHOOLS ARE DO NOT IMPORTANT IN FUTURE. CHILDREN CAN BE MUSHROOMED THEIR INFORMATION BY USING

INTERNET

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THE INTERNET

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. THEY DO NOT NEED TO GO

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TO SCHOOLS

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SCHOOLS

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SCHOOL

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. WHILE I

DIAGREE

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DISAGREE

WITH

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OPINION AND

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ESSAY WILL BE EXPLAINED MY VIEWPOINTS IN

FOLLOWING

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THE FOLLOWING

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PARAGRAPHS. TO COMMENCE WITH, THERE ARE A PLETHORA OF REASONS WHY INTERNET LEARNING IS NOT WORTHWHILE FOR JUVENILES. THEY CAN GET

DISTRACT

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DISTRACTED

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VERY EASILY WHILE STUDYING. OWING TO, DIFFERENT TYPES OF ADS WHICH ATTRACT TO THEM.

AS A RESULT

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, THEY WILL NOT GET THE OUTCOMES

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THAT

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THEY WANT. IN AMERICA MOST OF THE TEENAGERS DID NOT

PASSED

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THE TEST WHEN THEY

STUDY

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ONLINE DURING THE COVID 19 PERIOD.

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, IF STUDENTS DO NOT PAY

CONCENTRATION

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CONCENTRATE

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STUDY

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THAN

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THEN

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THEY WILL NOT GET SUCCESS IN THEIR LIFE.

FUTHERMORE

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FURTHERMORE

, MORE

STUDY

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METERIALS

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MATERIALS

CAN GET

CONFUSE

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CONFUSED

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TO STUDENTS BECAUSE WHEN THEY HAVE PLENTY OF VIDEOS RELATED TO ONE TOPIC

THAN

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THEY DO NOT GET CLEAR THEIR

DOUTS

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DOUBTS

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. AS A CONSEQUENCE,THEY WILL NOT

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BE EXPERT

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EXPERT

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EXPERTS

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IN THEIR FIELD.

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, IF

YOUNGONES

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YOUNG ONES

STUDY

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UNDER THE

GUIDENCE

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GUIDANCE

OF TEACHERS

THAN

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THEN

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THEY WILL IMPROVE THEIR WEEK POINTS. "THE LIFE" IS A IT COMPANY WHICH HIERS ONLY THOSE WORKERS WHO COMPLETED THEIR

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STUDY

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STUDIES

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WITH EITHER COLLEGES OR

UNIVERISITES

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UNIVERSITIES

. TO CONCLUDE,DOING

STUDY

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IN COLLEGE DO NOT ASSIST ONLY TO BECOME EXPERT BUT

ALSO

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IT CLEARS ALL

DOUTHS

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DEATHS

DOUBTS

YOUTHS

THAT ARE RELATED TO

STUDY

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. ONLINE LEARNING IS

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A WAST

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WASTE

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WAST

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WASTE

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OF TIME DUE TO DIFFERENT

DISTRACETION

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DISTRACTION

DISTRACTIONS

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ADVERTIESMENTS

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

253 words

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Fully explain your ideas

the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

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