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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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It is generally believed that before embarking on colleges many young people are advised teenagers should go for working and travelling,
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 a good option for them.I believe that ,by doing
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 ,millennials can save money for their tertiary
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 biggest drawback. The main advantage of taking a break from school for 12 months is nowadays ,
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 level of
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 of
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youngsters
 decide to go straight for a job before they begin their higher
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them to pay
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,living
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 and make them independent rather than struggling financially .
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 of California ,average students requires $2000 for survival per annum,so they drop out
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 studies because they can't afford
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it. On the darker side,it is generally observed that scholars who
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 used to working or travelling
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 to come back
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 student life.They choose directly go for a job
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 beneath their capabilities .
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 government ,60%
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 who take a gap from their
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academics
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 will be not suitable for them . To conclude,taking a pause from colleges
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 the students in saving money
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along with
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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