Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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No wonder the
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has an impact on each person life.
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have come to be more
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on the
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the
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the
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should be limited for the education goals. I strongly agree with
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statement for some reasons I would discuss in the following essay. The
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has a positive effect on education as it helps in facilitating doing research or help in getting an idea explained again because the lecture is recorded and applied in school share online to students to access. Other than that, students can share their problems and get a suggestion about that particular problem to be solved. Like
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, my brother had a problem writing an essay as he did not get the idea of the subject of the homework. When he shares it in hob of their school, his colleagues help him in understanding the subject.
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the tool they do not use
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to the new one by
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that information
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online. Like when my brother gets his
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laptop was because his senior colleague has graduate and he did not need it anymore.
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the other hand,
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has negative effects on general
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students because some of them lose
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precious time playing online games
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of studying.
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, they may fall
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some trouble scheme like getting their picture taken in
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way and get memorize by it.
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, the idea of meeting strangers
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online
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social media is totally
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because we do not know what
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stranger might affect
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the student. In conclusion, the
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is a handy tool that student relay in it.
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, it should be under some boundary to education goals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
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