some people think watching TV is bad to children in every way. other think TV has positive effects on children , as they develop to grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some opine that

television

affects

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negatively affects

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adversely on

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the

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development of youth

whereas

others think the opposite.

This

essay tries to discuss both views in my opinion

later

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latter

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one is better because of

catastrophic

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the catastrophic

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effect on health and make teenager uncivilized. To commence,

television

results badly on the body.

In other words

, there are numerous rays emitted from the

television

that not only weaken the eyesight but

also

the neuro system.

Moreover

, it makes youngsters lethargic. In conventional times, during leisure time

children

play outdoor games which make them more active . A survey was held in Denmark, in 2018, which revealed that the rate of diseases like obesity, burgeoning after the demand for

television

increase

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in the market. Next to it, nowadays,

television

is the main source owing to which young ones

behaviours

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inappropriately in

the

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society.

This

means

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children

brain is like a car with weak breaks but good acceleration.

Furthermore

, they have a habit of replication. When they watch anything on TV try to implement

in

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it in

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their life.

For instance

. In ,America the rate of juvenile crime starts increasing every year after the permission given by the government to broadcast violent shows . On the other side, the acquisition of knowledge is

also

an important thing. The

numbers

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of TV channels like Discovery helps to enhance the knowledge in the field of science. Visualisation imprints

children

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children's

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minds more than audio.

Although

there are many more activities to relax it is one of them to take a break from the monotony schedule under the observation of parents.

Children

do not know that what is good for them or not .So parents should monitor

that

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what they are watching on

television

.

To conclude

, prolonged use of

television

is bad for both the health and the development of the mind.