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information about the underground railway systems in six cities. write anything

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The table gives some data about the metro train systems in 6 countries. ,
Also
this
 table shows the date opened, km and
passengers
 each year.
Overall
, the latest time opened belonged
Los
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Angeles
,
,,
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nevertheless
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 the least number belonged to
Kyota
 both km and
passengers
.
In addition
,
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the passengers'
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passengers'
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high
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rate number happened in Tokyo,
while
 the earliest time occurred in
Paris
.
Finally
, the longest was in
Paris
.
Firstly
,
Paris
 railways systems were opened in 1900 the earliest than the others.
In contrast
, the latest became in
Lon
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Los
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Angeles
 in 2001. The pointer of
Kyota
 and Los
Angeles
 was relatively similar to each other,
,,
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however
 the least equalled to 45million in
Kyota
. Only
Los
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Angeles
 railway systems were established in
21
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 century than the others. On the one hand, most of the passenger number was pointed out in Tokyo with 1927 million, on top of that the closer index was 1191 million
passengers
 in
Paris
. Another factor, the minimum length of the route was 11 km in
Kyota
.
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