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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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People assume the most essential key between managers and workers is
communication
 while others believe that there are more essential keys to
achieve
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successful
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organization
. I will discuss both views in
this
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Communication
 is the key factor to strengthen
interpersonal
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the interpersonal
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relationship
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relationships
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 in
workplace
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the workplace
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 between managers and workers. A salient example is discussing
on
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how to solve
problem
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the problem
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 in a project. When the employees could not deliver their issue due to their anxiety if their
manager
 would angry at them, it would cause misunderstanding. The
manager
 would think that the
employee
 could handle the problem while
actually
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 the
employee
 has no encouragement to deliver the problem.
For instance
, employer and
employee
 who build
communication
, they could maintain good relationship inside and outside
work
.
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Employee
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The employee
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 could share or brainstorm their opinion about improvement
to
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 the executives. The executives should accept the feedback because it would help
company
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the company
a company
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 to achieve a goal to be
successful
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a successful
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organization
.
On the other hand
, there are other factors that could lead
great
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 success for
organization
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an organization
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 apart from
communication
such
 as integrity and trust.
For example
, managers could not
work
 alone without workers who will help them to achieve company
goal
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goals
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. There should be
a
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trust from
manager
 to
worker
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 so a
worker
 would feel happy to do their
work
.
However
, a
worker
 should proof their integrity as part of the responsibility to tackle their
work
 and deliver the good result as well.
Nevertheless
, these other factors might not happen if there is no
communication
 between
manager
 and
worker
 to have
same
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 vision to achieve
successful
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the successful
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 goal in
organization
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the organization
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. In conclusion, from my point of view,
communication
 is the key success to build
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a relationship
the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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 between employees and
employer
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employers
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 to create
positive
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a positive
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 environment in a workplace. Without good
communication
, I believe that they could not communicate their purpose as well and the other factors
means
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 nothing.
Submitted by Vanda Majas on

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