Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

Fast foodstuff on the plates at every meal is not only a habit but

also

a status symbol nowadays. It has been argued that the government must raise tax on

such

kinds of cuisine items to galvanize the public to initiate eating fresh and healthy. I

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notion because it would help individuals to get rid of obesity and related diseases,

in addition

to that, it could

also

enhance physical

as well as

mental fitness.

This

essay will dive into the detailed advantages of it in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, it has been proved that eating burgers,

pizza

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is absolutely responsible for gaining obesity

due to

high

calory

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calorie

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contents in it. When people get erroneously habitual in eating

such

unhealthy

food

the cholesterol level in their blood rises resulting in raised blood pressure, heart disease and even heart attack. So, if the law

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heavy tariffs on eating fast

food

, the crowd

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definitely reduce eating them as they will

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no longer pocket

friendly

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pocket-friendly

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.

For instance

,

according to

the survey conducted by WHO, in March 2020, revealed that the number of the population visiting fast-

food

restaurants in London suddenly came down to 40% when additional taxes were implemented.

This

elucidates the effectiveness of tax applications.

In addition

to that family eating an unhealthy snack is more lethargic, lazy and suffers from depression and anxiety

due to

lack of nutrients in their diet. The ministry's decision to apply taxation on unhealthy

food

would definitely

promote

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people to eat fresh fruits and vegetables which are comparatively cheaper and readily available.

For example

, in my neighbourhood, both children of Mrs Patil were notorious and hesitated to eat home-cooked

food

. But when

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their prices hiked and it became difficult for Mrs Patil to afford them, eventually everyone's plate started becoming full of home-cooked meals almost every single day and they even started enjoying the

food

.

Thus

it substantiates that applying duty on fast feed is a demand of the time today as it is going to benefit society at

last

. In conclusion, I believe that

although

there are various ways to cut down on eating unhealthy

food

, the most effective one is the implementation of fines on them. It would not only help the people but

also

raise the revenue of the

authority

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that too for

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great cause.