It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is always argued that the technological evolvement is going to blur out the traditional culture, sooner or later. While it is true that we get moulded by our culture, I do believe it’s fading away and soon, it’s all going to change for good.
First
of all, nothing in human history has had a bigger impact on our
lives
than technology. It thoroughly changed the way we live, think, or even behave. With the invention of the internet and the arrival of smartphones, everyone has got the main source of knowledge right in the palm of their hands.
Secondly
, it
also
made us whole again by making it as easy as it can get for humanity to connect with our loved ones.
For instance
, even my 85-year old grandma can call her daughter who
lives
far away from her. The point I’m trying to make is that not all changes are for the worse.
Although
I agree that the advancement of tech has made our
lives
effortless, I’ll admit that it’s growing a little bit fast and some people are not able to get used to it as quickly as others. In my opinion, that’s the main reason that some old generations are sceptical about the whole intelligent science. They see the old ways much more reliable because they have done it
this
way for their entire
lives
. The obvious fact about all
this
is, humans cannot stick with what they have. That’s like our signature,
otherwise
, we would have stayed in caves. I know as a truth that these changes that we call the “new normal”, are going to be called old and traditional in the
next
few decades and some new modern lifestyle is going to substitute them. In conclusion, if we could somehow decrease the speed of these kinds of developments for every single person to get on board, traditional culture could manage to co-exist after all.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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