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‘For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.’ How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view?

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undeniable
 the fact that each and every one of us
shoul
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should
 know how to play at least one musical
instrument
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.
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, while the
ability
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 to play an
instrument
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 can provide some
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benefits
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 as improve concentration, increase creativity,etc, I do not agree with the idea that kids need to learn to play
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instrument
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instruments
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 just like they learn
read
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 and write.
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 of all, literacy is a necessary skill
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students
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. Because literacy is the
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 and compulsory
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children
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 learn in school, from
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 skill
students
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 cam understand information coming from other subjects and develop themselves.
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, youngster
students
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 who do not have
reading
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the reading
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ability
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 can not learn literature so they will be lacking communication skills,
expresing
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expressing
 opinions and persuasion.
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, reading and writing skill
also
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 affect their career.It is not the same as
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ability
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 to play
the
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instrument
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. Kids who can not play musical instruments still study well, develop other
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competencies
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competences
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 and get the job they want.
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, not all
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students
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 have a gift in
music
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 or
music
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 is not their cup of tea so it would be unfair to treat
music
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 as an essential
subject
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. If
music
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 is included in the compulsory curriculum, it will be a burden on the
children
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.
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,
children
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 with a talent for
music
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 will easily pass the requirements of the
subject
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, but the rest of the
children
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 may feel pressured to try to practice something beyond their
ability
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,
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 and feel inferior itself. In conclusion,
music
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 should still be an optional
subject
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. Pupils should know play
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instrument
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 but it cannot be a measure of a child's
ability
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, so it should not be considered as important as literacy.
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