You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter - describe the situation - explain your problems and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am extremely stressed with my current living conditions in my college. While the room itself provides me with all the basic amenities, it is the kleptomaniac tendency of my roommate that has made it impossible for us to live together now. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. Off late, it has come to my notice that many valuables of mine have gone missing. Having done some investigation of my own, I found them surprisingly hidden in my roommate’s cupboard.
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, all
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while, he had been lying to me when I would ask him if he had seen the things that have gone missing. Due to
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, it has become impossible for me now, to focus on my studies, as now I am living under
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belongings of mine. Would you kindly provide me with a separate room of mine ? I am perfectly fine if I have to share my room with someone else who is more considerate of others. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Abhinaba
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