If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Thanks to the development of transportation and globalisation, people these days can travel anywhere they want,
hence
multicultural cities have emerged.
Nevertheless
,
discrimination
regarded with people’s nationalities, races or religions is a
debateable
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debatable
issue
that requires
immidiate
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immediate
solutions. Some people believe that these problems can not be solved because they are nature-made while others think that they are artificial and some actions can be done to tackle these issues.
This
essay will indicate some reasons why they are man-made and suggest some possible remedies. Human's attitudes can be affected by the surrounding environment because every creature is born as a blank page. Their papers which are their characteristics, their beliefs, their attitudes are written either by their experiences or by what they have been taught since they were children.
For example
, the rate of youth crime in the Middle East area is relatively higher than
other
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regions of the world, because not only are these children equipped with adequate knowledge but they are
also
armed and get used to a wide range of weapons by adults.
Therefore
,
discrimination
is what people learn, it is not innate.
Discrimination
like racism or xenophobia is a global problem,which is needed to be
eradication
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, requiring rational solutions. One remedy to
this
crisis
is
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education. Parents who play a crucial role in nurturing and shaping their children's schools of thought need to take
this
issue
significantly. Schools should elevate their syllabus by adding more lessons about multiculturalism and broaden students’ minds about
this
. Another solution to resolve
this
issue
, in terms of government, is that the national authorities should take up some campaigns or implement policies to promote equity.
Finally
, it is necessary to have a joint conference of differents countries worldwide to take steps to prevent
discrimination
. Recently, there have been many celebrities who fight against racism in various fields
such
as politics, music industries and sports, especially the one who is a migrant to European countries. In conclusion,
discrimination
is not a natural
phenomonen
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phenomenon
. It is a global problem
which
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is caused by humans.
Therefore
, they must seek solutions to tackle
this
ubiquitous
issue
.
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