An increasing number of people now are using the internet to meet others and socialise. Some think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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each other within the society.Whereas some people believe that it has encouraged cohesion in the society; Others

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a separating factor.I incline to the fact that online communications

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allowed

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number of

individuals

to come closer and socialize with no

efforts

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.

First

and foremost, improved network coverage has increased communications between

individuals

meaning it provides a platform for

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way of receiving and sending back information

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making

communication

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process complete.

In addition

, social platforms

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encouraged

individuals

to express their feelings

thus

promoting the freedom of speech for every Tom,Dick and Harry.

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,elected leaders

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used the same platform to reach out

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of

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enabling them to

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off their ideas to

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society,

as a

result

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the communities are able to identify themselves with their leaders.

Furthermore

,

internet

coverage has encouraged continuity of friendship meaning ancient childhood

friends

can meet and continue chatting like in the case of

facebook

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friends

.

For instance

,a recent study has shown that 89% of social platforms users have a vast number of

friends

compared to the number of

friends

that can meet physically.

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,

internet

coverage and social media platforms

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increased the level of interaction of

individuals

within

community

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setup.

On the contrary

, online communications

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watered down the kind of friendships that

exited

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during colonial error.

Firstly

, it has made

individuals

to

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become indolent to holding physical

meeting

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meetings

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instead

prefer having virtual meetings.

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to that,

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of smartphones and complicated gadgets have added salt to the injury by increasing the level of

conviniace

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convenience

.

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, the rise of different groups on social media

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gives a person

opportunity

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to identify with what they like depending on their preference.

Thus

, the old fashion way of people having fun together is reduced. To conclude, advance in technology and increased levels of

internet

connectivity has enabled

individuals

to continue keeping

friends

globally,

therefore

, promoting cohesion within the societies.