An increasing number of people now are using the internet to meet others and socialise. Some think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The current trend has seen
individuals
using internet
connectivity influence on
each other within the society.Whereas some people believe that it has encouraged cohesion in the society; Others Change preposition
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however
,has seen it Add the comma(s)
,however
has
a separating factor.I incline to the fact that online communications Correct your spelling
as
has
allowed Change the verb form
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great
number of Change the article
a great
the great
individuals
to come closer and socialize with no efforts
.
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effort
First
and foremost, improved network coverage has increased communications between individuals
meaning it provides a platform for quick
way of receiving and sending back information Add an article
a quick
thus
making communication
process complete.Correct article usage
the communication
In addition
, social platforms has
encouraged Change the verb form
have
individuals
to express their feelings thus
promoting the freedom of speech for every Tom,Dick and Harry.Moreover
,elected leaders has
used the same platform to reach out Change the verb form
have
magnitude
of Add an article
the magnitude
masses
enabling them toCorrect article usage
the masses
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the
society,Correct article usage
apply
as a
result
the communities are able to identify themselves with their leaders.Add the comma(s)
,result
Furthermore
, internet
coverage has encouraged continuity of friendship meaning ancient childhood friends
can meet and continue chatting like in the case of facebook
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Facebook
friends
.For instance
,a recent study has shown that 89% of social platforms users have a vast number of friends
compared to the number of friends
that can meet physically.Therefore
, internet
coverage and social media platforms has
increased the level of interaction of Change the verb form
have
individuals
within community
setup.
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the community
On the contrary
, online communications has
watered down the kind of friendships that Change the verb form
have
exited
during colonial error.Correct your spelling
existed
Firstly
, it has made individuals
to
become indolent to holding physical Change the verb form
apply
meeting
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meetings
instead
prefer having virtual meetings.In addition
to that, availability
of smartphones and complicated gadgets have added salt to the injury by increasing the level of Correct article usage
the availability
conviniace
.Correct your spelling
convenience
For example
, the rise of different groups on social media which
gives a person Correct pronoun usage
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opportunity
to identify with what they like depending on their preference.Correct article usage
the opportunity
Thus
, the old fashion way of people having fun together is reduced.
To conclude, advance in technology and increased levels of internet
connectivity has enabled individuals
to continue keeping friends
globally,therefore
, promoting cohesion within the societies.Submitted by Sabina Hamisi on
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