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the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

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The graphs give some data about the kinds of music albums were bought by
people
 in Britain.
In addition
,
this
 graph illustrates according to gender and age. Overall, units are measured in percentage, in , the fact the statistic of men was appreciated better than the pointer of women. There are various age groups and encircle from 16 to 45 or more. With regards to gender, the pointers were shown in males just above one-quarter of
people
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 the statistic of females was equalled just under one-fifth of
people
. In terms of age, the indexes of 25-34 and 16-24 ages were relatively similar,
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 the maximum show belonged from 25 to 34 ages approximately more than thirty in every one hundred. The number from 16-24 was closer to thirty in every a hundred. The least result belonged to 45 or just above with approximately one-tenth of
people
.
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 in every one hundred
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