It will add value to the community who reside in the
cities
rather than outskirts or in the countryside. I agree with Use synonyms
this
statement that there is a lot of opportunity in the Linking Words
cities
for those who decide to live there.
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Firstly
, there is an offer of greater employment possibility and higher standard of living in the Linking Words
city
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this
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organization
and government facilities are located Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
thus
many job opportunities. Linking Words
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the availability
specialist
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specialists
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these
institution
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institutions
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is
city
and Use synonyms
latest
technologies because of internet connection. Correct article usage
the latest
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A
research done by the Nairobi university shows that 95% of Correct article usage
apply
graduate
would prefer to live in the Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
city
after graduating. Use synonyms
Therefore
, there is greater and competitive employment and Linking Words
high
standard of living.
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a high
Secondly
, life in the Linking Words
cities
is crowded Use synonyms
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therefore
therefor
it can be a bit stressful. Correct your spelling
therefore
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addition
there is pollution and often quite noisy. Add a comma
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is overwhelming for Linking Words
city
dwellers as many people will not be able to rent big houses because they are expensive and Use synonyms
thus
there is overcrowding in small houses. Linking Words
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show
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,show
countryside
.Add an article
the countryside
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life in the Linking Words
city
is expensive and crowded.
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city
has Use synonyms
greater
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the greater
a greater
opportunity
and become for efficient in their daily activities due to better infrastructure and education Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
opportunity
in the Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
cities
. Perhaps it is more enjoyable to live in the Use synonyms
city
than Use synonyms
is
Correct your spelling
in
suburbs
.Correct article usage
the suburbs