Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people believe moving from

one

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place

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to another

place

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to live is a good thing because it will help you adventure and help you to see different places and

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give you different experiences in life.

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, I do not agree with

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opinion and think that living in a fixed

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is better for two reasons, which I will illustrate in the following essay.

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with, you can build strong friendships with your neighbours. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of

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. A good illustration of

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is that my family is living in a city for the

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30 years.

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, I know lots of people in our area and have a chance to make many good friends and

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get some elder persons whos really love me and I have the opportunity to learn many things from them.

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, I feel if you live in a town or city for life-time you can know many people and you can share your sorrows with them and

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can join in their good moments which can help you to make your life more enjoyable and easy to lead.

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, you can know your surrounding situation well which will reduce the chances of facing unwanted problems for those you are not prepared

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one

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of my junior school close friend's

father

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has a governmental job. Since

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his family has to move from

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area to another area after some years interval. I found him saying about some new and unwanted problems after every shift

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as in someplace they found there has no renowned educational institute, someplace has water supply

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, other has no governmental gas line, someplace has security issue and so on. These types of situations are not wanting for anyone.

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, we are not facing new types of problems. But you can not say I live in paradise, my family face

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with electricity supply but it is not a new

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so we use solar energy to overcome

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problem

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type of known

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can solve easily and you can prepare yourself for it. To conclude, living in

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town or city is better than living from

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place

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to another.

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is because it will build a strong friendly relation with your neighbours and

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reduce the chances of facing different unwanted situations.

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

398 words

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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