Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate? Discuss both views.

It is important that a
country
finacial
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financial
growth should be
sufficent
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sufficient
enough to meet the needs of the people, the
economy
of the
counrty
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country
county
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should
be a priority of the
goverments
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government
governments
because with adequate money the problems of the
indivituals
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individuals
at the present would be solved
accordingly
.
therefore
, with a growing
economy
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the
governments
can provide infrastructures that will help the
less
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fortunates
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fortunate
.
Moreover
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if there are structures put in place to generate money for the growth of the
country
the
economy
will grow
also
this
will help in more developments. without
a
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apply
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proper funds there
wont
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be
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a
sucessful
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successful
uplifting of the less fortunate.
in other words
the less fortunate needs
the
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apply
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support from the
governments
to help the
trive
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tribe
thrive
. There
is
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no
doupts
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doubts
doubt
that the
governments
has
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a very important role in the life of the less fortunate by helping them provide materials that will assist them in their day to day living,
this
could
accutually
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actually
generate funds into the
country
and reduce the stress
also
on the
governments
. In conclusion, proper understanding from both parties plays a very vital
roles
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, as
such
that the government will provide materials,
infrastructres
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infrastructures
infrastructure
,
empoyment
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employment
programes
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programmes
programs
that could help the less
privilage
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privilege
privileged
and for these reasons, there will be
better growing
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economy
in the
country
that will aid adequate and better developments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • job opportunities
  • standards of living
  • infrastructure
  • public services
  • advocates
  • positive cycle
  • social equity
  • justice
  • government policies
  • reduce poverty
  • essential services
  • healthcare
  • education
  • equitable distribution
  • balanced approach
  • implementing policies
  • equitably shared
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