Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure a growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its efforts on uplifting the less fortunate? Discuss both views.
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individuals
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governments
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fortunate
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country
the economy
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governments
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and reduce the stress also
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better-growing
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in the country
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