In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. Give your opinion with relevant examples.

There has been a rise in demand for the

contruction

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construction

of new

homes

these days. Some

people

think these should not be built in

countryside

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the countryside

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so that

this

area

could be protected.

However

, I am of the opinion that

construction

of the

buildinga

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building

buildings

wgis

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wigs

at

rural

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the rural

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area

is required to meet the demand of

increasing

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the increasing

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population.

This

essay shall discuss how

this

construction

can

benefits

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both

to

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home overpopulation and in

development

of rural

areas

.

Firstly

, constructing new

houses

in the outskirts can meet the need for the residential

area

of

increased

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the increased

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population of the cities.

For instance

, urban

areas

have been already developed with the

construction

of big hotels, corporate

office

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offices

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and

hih

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high

socities

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societies

residential

buidlings

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buildings

Due to

this

,

people

from

low income

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low-income

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group

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groups

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reside in open

areas

resulting in slums which ultimately pollute the environment.

Therefore

,

construction

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of

houses

in the

countryside

not only home those

people

but

also

protect the

environemnt

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environment

to get contaminated.

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,

building

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of

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new

houses

in the

countryside

seems more beneficial.

In addition

to

this

, building new

homes

also

leads to

development

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the development

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of these backwards

areas

.

For example

, more

people

tend to move towards villages when they are provided with new residential

areas

which ultimately results in the overall progress of

these

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this area

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area

with basic

infrastructure

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such

as roads,

electricty

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electricity

and water.

Beside

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that, a large number of job opportunities will be created by the overall

development

of these outskirts.

Therefore

, it is clear

these

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this contruction

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contruction

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construction

can benefit rural

areas

more with the

development

of basic amenities. To conclude, it is clear how

construction

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the construction

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of new

homes

in

countryside

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the countryside

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benefits by providing

homes

to overpopulation along with the overall

development

of these

areas

.

Thus

, it is hoped more

houses

will be

contructed

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constructed

in outskirts in

forseeable

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foreseeable

future

..

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