In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. Give your opinion with relevant examples.

There has been a rise in demand for the
contruction
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construction
of new
homes
these days. Some
people
think these should not be built in
countryside
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the countryside
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so that
this
area
could be protected.
However
, I am of the opinion that
construction
of the
buildinga
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building
buildings
wgis
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wigs
at
rural
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area
is required to meet the demand of
increasing
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the increasing
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population.
This
essay shall discuss how
this
construction
can
benefits
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both
to
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home overpopulation and in
development
of rural
areas
.
Firstly
, constructing new
houses
in the outskirts can meet the need for the residential
area
of
increased
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the increased
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population of the cities.
For instance
, urban
areas
have been already developed with the
construction
of big hotels, corporate
office
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offices
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and
hih
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high
socities
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societies
residential
buidlings
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buildings
Due to
this
,
people
from
low income
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group
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reside in open
areas
resulting in slums which ultimately pollute the environment.
Therefore
,
construction
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of
houses
in the
countryside
not only home those
people
but
also
protect the
environemnt
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environment
to get contaminated.
Thus
,
building
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of
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new
houses
in the
countryside
seems more beneficial.
In addition
to
this
, building new
homes
also
leads to
development
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the development
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of these backwards
areas
.
For example
, more
people
tend to move towards villages when they are provided with new residential
areas
which ultimately results in the overall progress of
these
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area
with basic
infrastructure
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such
as roads,
electricty
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electricity
and water.
Beside
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that, a large number of job opportunities will be created by the overall
development
of these outskirts.
Therefore
, it is clear
these
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contruction
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construction
can benefit rural
areas
more with the
development
of basic amenities. To conclude, it is clear how
construction
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the construction
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of new
homes
in
countryside
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the countryside
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benefits by providing
homes
to overpopulation along with the overall
development
of these
areas
.
Thus
, it is hoped more
houses
will be
contructed
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constructed
in outskirts in
forseeable
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foreseeable
future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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