SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION, SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY. OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATION. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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and bad moment is a truth of the life. Some people believe that it is good to accept
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. Others argue that it is good to try and improve the
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, we should accept that
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and try to improve it in a better
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, unsatisfactory
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or shortage of
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of
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and he did not accept it
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how can he save
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day
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not like his
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then
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how can he be happy
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he should accept the
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then
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only he will search
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,
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is not a solution
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the problem or bad
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ethical means.
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gives us only stress and anxiety in life we should think about that
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like what he
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not like about
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after that he should try to learn related to the
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he will definitely like the
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teach
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major
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lesson in
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life and we have to try and improve the bad
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in a good
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. In conclusion,
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accepting
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situation
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and try to
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in
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situation
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take us towards success and happiness. We should follow both
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views in any
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for sure it will help in a good
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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