SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION, SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY. OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATION. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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and bad moment is a truth of the life. Some people believe that it is good to accept
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the bad
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moment
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. Others argue that it is good to try and improve the
situation
. Both views are acceptable and valid.
However
, we should accept that
situation
and try to improve it in a better
way
.
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a bad
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situation
is the
first
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or shortage of
money
. If someone having
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of
money
and he did not accept it
then
how can he save
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day
.
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not like his
job
then
how can he be happy
.
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he should accept the
situation
then
only he will search
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other
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another job
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job
.
Moreover
,
acception
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exception
accepting
is the
first
step towards success but only accept the
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it
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is not a solution
of
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the problem or bad
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. Try to find
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a solution
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and make
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in the
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ethical means.
Such
as,
unsatisfactory
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the unsatisfactory
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job
gives us only stress and anxiety in life we should think about that
situation
like what he
do
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not like about
job
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after that he should try to learn related to the
job
and in a positive
way
he will definitely like the
job
. Shortage of
money
teach
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major
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a major
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lesson in
a
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life and we have to try and improve the bad
situation
in a good
way
. In conclusion,
acception
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exception
accepting
of
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the disgusting
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situation
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and try to
improvement
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in
such
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situation
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take us towards success and happiness. We should follow both
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views in any
situation
for sure it will help in a good
way
.
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