Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In the contemporary era, most of the young people from rural
areas
are moving to metropolitan
areas
from their native places for schooling or job. As there is a lack of discipline standards and jobs in rural
areas
compared to cities.
Thus
moving to metropolitan
areas
has more benefits than staying in the countryside.
Firstly
, In rural ,
areas
there is a lack of teaching standards when compared to metropolitan
areas
.
For instance
, in rural
areas
schools or colleges, teachers concentrate on theoretical knowledge, whereas in the cities they concentrate more on practical knowledge which would help students to gain more knowledge.
Also
in countryside schools or colleges we can only select either mother tongue and English as a primary and secondary language, but in ,cities there will be multiple options, we can opt for foreign language as secondary.
Therefore
most of the students are moving to metropolitan
areas
for education.
Secondly
, In the countryside ,job opportunities are very few. Because there are very few companies, even those
also
limited to particular industries mostly related to agriculture.
For example
, I have graduated from my hometown, but I am working in a metropolitan city because none of the companies in my hometown is suitable for my educational qualification and the skill set I have. So I have moved to the city to get better opportunities where I can utilise my education and skills efficiently,
Likewise
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most of the educated people are moving out to metropolitan
areas
.
This
shows that most of the people who are moving from rural
areas
to metropolitan
areas
are getting benefited with knowledge-wise as well as career-wise.
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  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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