Many countries spend a lot of money on improved transport for urban areas while neglecting rural transport. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?
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therefore
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transport
improvement
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people
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This
essay will demonstrate both problems and some ways to solve them.
To start with, as everyone knew
, an urban always has more Wrong verb form
knows
tourism
attractions, Replace the word
tourist
that
they make a lot of tourists Correct word choice
and
travel
, so the government
is unavoidable to enhance transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
such
as buses, train
and others. Fix the agreement mistake
trains
Also
, people
or tourists want to go to a city
to travel
or work because this
has modernisation and technological advance
. Fix the agreement mistake
advances
Additionally
, the government
might think that the urban city
is the
place for combining many Correct article usage
a
people
to work or travel
. These are the main issue which the government
accepts these
and only improve urban.
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However
, there are many ways which
will solve these problems. Correct pronoun usage
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Firstly
, the government
should build or change something such
as tourism attractions or the
malls to Correct article usage
apply
similar
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be similar
with
the Change preposition
to
city
in order to
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for to
people
can
decide to Verb problem
apply
travel
in their city
. Moreover
, the government
have some sufficient reasons to improve its transports
to the countryside. Fix the agreement mistake
transport
In addition
, the state should build pathways to link provinces, and it is useful for people
who need to work in the city
, will
not use their own car Correct word choice
and will
that it
can help global warming to better.
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which
To conclude
, according to
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this
essay, it
will just suggest Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
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apply
this
way to improve transport because not only this
is necessary for everyone but also
some tourist attractions are more worth
.Replace the word
worthwhile
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