In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays, the technology of computers, the internet, and smartphones wide
spreads
more than the recent time. Change the verb form
spread
Moreover
, many people
prefer to remote working from their homes and reduce going to the workplace. This
essay will look at the positive aspects of this
issue and also
the negative from
Change preposition
of
this
development.
In these times, there are definite advantages to people
being allowed to work
from home because we can use not only paper but also
computer
or smartphones that are connect Fix the agreement mistake
computers
by
the internet. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, the internet technology is developed rapidly so they can do variety thing when they stay at our resident or anywhere such
as conference by using application
that they can save the time travel to Add an article
an application
the application
meeting
place, using email send Add an article
the meeting
a meeting
document
in order to reduce applying papers and faster than send by messenger. Add an article
the document
a document
However
, work
from home is the best method for keeping away from crowd
when the pandemic or political circumstance, Add an article
the crowd
for example
, coronavirus-19 outbreak, mob-protester and so on.
On the other hand
, remote working has some opposing view, when people
who work
with no one control can make some people
to
be lazy Change the verb form
apply
such
as they will switch to play a game or do something that irrelevant about their work
easily. In addition
, travelling to work
and working in an office with others can be a very sociable activity which many people
enjoy, especially if they live on their own. Without this
social interaction
many Add a comma
,interaction
people
might feel very lonely.
To conclude, there are both advantages and disadvantages with
working from home and Change preposition
to
people
need to focus on their assignment
because it is Fix the agreement mistake
assignments
freedom
to Add an article
the freedom
work
, flexibility, and comfort.Submitted by northpole_43420 on
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