In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Nowadays, the technology of computers, the internet, and smartphones wide
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more than the recent time.
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, many
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prefer to remote working from their homes and reduce going to the workplace.
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the negative
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development. In these times, there are definite advantages to
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being allowed to
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from home because we can use not only paper but
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computer
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computers
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or smartphones that are connect
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the internet.
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, the internet technology is developed rapidly so they can do variety thing when they stay at our resident or anywhere
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as conference by using
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that they can save the time travel to
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place, using email send
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in order to reduce applying papers and faster than send by messenger.
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,
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from home is the best method for keeping away from
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when the pandemic or political circumstance,
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, coronavirus-19 outbreak, mob-protester and so on.
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, remote working has some opposing view, when
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who
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with no one control can make some
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be lazy
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as they will switch to play a game or do something that irrelevant about their
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easily.
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, travelling to
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and working in an office with others can be a very sociable activity which many
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enjoy, especially if they live on their own. Without
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social
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many
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might feel very lonely. To conclude, there are both advantages and disadvantages
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working from home and
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need to focus on their
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because it is
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the freedom
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to
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, flexibility, and comfort.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • telecommuting
  • virtual collaboration
  • work-life balance
  • productivity
  • flexibility
  • commuting
  • isolation
  • disconnect
  • coordination
  • boundaries
  • distractions
  • remote work
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