You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • describe the health problem • explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office • suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am suffering from a urinary tract infection. As a consequence of,
this
I am suffering from a high fever and
also
having a burning sensation while urinating. Let me explain to you in more detail. I think that I got
this
disease mainly due to the poor hygiene condition of the office toilets. Often it has been observed that they are not clean. The housekeeping staff are cleaning it once a day
that is
not enough considering the number of employees working here. Can I please suggest you look into
this
issue? It is better if you have a discussion with our administration department and increase the number of cleaning staff.
Moreover
, the introduction of a training program for employees to educate them on basic washroom habits will
also
be of great help. I will look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Shreya
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