Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Art

is the externalization of

the

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individual skills and reflects the heritage of a

country

. At present,

art

seems to lose its value because of less concern by the

government

,

however

, I feel that

art

still requires being given more value than other basic necessities of any nation.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why

art

should be the priority of any

country

?

First

of all, It is the best source of generating revenue income for the

government

. Museums,

art

galleries, and musical concerts are the place,

from

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where a handsome revenue is taken. Mesmerizing sculptures, beautifully engraved paintings by renowned artists adorn the beauty of the museums and attract tourists. Undoubtedly, these tourists are the greatest source of revenue income. These tourists throng in large

number

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on these historical places and monuments that help to promote local handicrafts, resulting in providing income to the small-scale industries.

Secondly

,

art

is the cultural and historical reflection of every

country

. It is the real asset of every

country

that brings uniqueness and pride for every

country

and if a fund is not allocating by the

government

then

it will be difficult to keep

this

alive.

However

, some opponents of the

art

say that spending money by a

government

on

art

hampers the development of the

country

in regards to good infrastructure, road system, efficient transport system and medical facilities.

Moreover

, allocating money to education and medical facilities definitely lessens the literacy rate and increases well being of the nation that helps a

country

to grow. To conclude,

art

is really an integral part of every

country

,

therefore

, the

government

should fund

art

museums and promote artists’ values to keep and maintain the glorify the history of the

country

otherwise

artists and

the

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art

will be lost in oblivion.