Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
Some people tend to take a part-
time
job
, which means they work several months a year and spend the remaining time
on something that they are interested in. In my opinion, we should respect each individual's choice, and both full-time
job
and part-time
job
have their advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, people who take a full-time
job
have more potential to achieve more success in their careers. They are more likely to become an expert in a specific domain, gain a more senior position in the organization and get a higher salary. For example
, a full-time
engineer who is designing the architecture of a bridge for years knows all the details of the factors for building a robust bridge. Because of his rich experience, his employer will be more interested to retain him instead
of a part-time
employee.
On the other hand
, people who take part-time
jobs will live a free life. For example
, he can arrange his work time
according to the need of home life. After getting enough money from the job
, he will put his energy and time
into things that most attracts him. Part-time
workers have more time
to exercise more often and get better sleep. Part-time
employment also
allows for more efficient management of daily tasks like grocery shopping, doing the laundry, and ultimately resulting in more order at home. at
the meantime, full-Change preposition
In
time
workers tend to feel worn out, due to insufficient time
needed to exercise or enjoy the sunny outdoors.
In conclusion, both full-time
and part-time
lifestyles have pros and cons, the choice depends on each individual's life goal setting.Submitted by raywoocn on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite