Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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people

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think

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that it is more important to plant

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trees

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tress

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trees

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open

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an open

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area

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areas

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town

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towns

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and cities , while some

people

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believe that we should build more

building

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compeletly

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completely

agree with the former statement, and in

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essay

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I will support my view with examples. One of the most significant

benefit

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of trees is fresh air.

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, in the city where I live, we only have some

part

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with

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trees and more surrounded by

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concreate

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buildings. Due to

which

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we do

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not

get

sufficient

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amount of fresh air to

breath

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and it may

affectour

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affect our

health. To solve

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issue we should increase plantation, in order to have

safe

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and secure environment.

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people

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in cities can live healthy

ife

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life

and breath

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safer and clear air.

Nowdays

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, housing construction

have

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increased but tree plantation has

deseaced

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deceased

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people

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tend to visit

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the area

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area

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where they can enjoy the

scenaries

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sceneries

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and have less stress to enjoy their holidays. The Uk studies claimed that tress can

reduced

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human stress by 60%. Personally, one can have their own garden inside their house, so that it may help them to calm their mind and at the same time they can enjoy gardening. In conclusion,

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we need to build more housing,

but

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it's important to consider human health and for

that

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we need to plant more

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trees

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

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