Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of schooling is undeniable. It decides what kinds of people we would be, what kind of job we will do and what kind of life we will lead.

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, what should or should not be taught at

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is a heated topic. Some people believe that

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like

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and drama should be included in the education curriculum since they are the same essential as academic

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, especially in primary

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. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement and my reason is below. The

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advantage of

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,

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and drama class is that many young artistic talents can discover. When students join the

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class in elementary

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, they can learn about their potential and parents can have a plan to develop a future career for their children. Without participating in these activities, some artistic individuals might be denied the chance to achieve their full potential. In Vietnam,

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, the primary

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must have

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and

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class. Every year, through artistic and

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competitions at

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, there is more than 50 young talent discovered and they are offered the opportunity to transfer to specialized

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schools. Another compelling reason why non-academic

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are as crucial as academic

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that non-academic

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develop essential attributes, which help students are more employable in the future. It could be said that the main objective of people who attend

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is to get well-paid jobs after they finish.

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, at the lowest level of education, many students are taught that they should focus on academic

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that can be related to their careers.

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, employers nowadays are more concerned about attributes like adaptability, creativity and soft skills. These qualities are developed by playing

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, participating in team sports more than joining in academic lessons.

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, these

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play the important role in the student’s aim.

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, according to the Vietnamese Social Journal, 60% of large corporations in Vietnam ask a high level of adaptability from their candidates as employees are required to travel and work at many different workplaces. In conclusion, non-academic

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should be as vital as academic

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at the elementary level because they allow to

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talents and build attributes that are necessary for a future career.