Nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

It is widely noted that nowadays constructions with open strategy designs are becoming increasingly popular among most demographics of
this
century.
Although
it has several positive sights, it
also
has a major negative aspect. To start with, everyone intends to increase their houses and business, which has turned into a common trend. By
this
many public lose their savings, even these construction take so many lives within a
second
.
For example
, in 2012 Bangladesh faced an unexpected disaster in the building known as Rana plaza which, was made without any plans.
Such
buildings are made by low qualities equipment. The building making authority granted for only ten floor's which is comfortable for
this
place but eventually, the owner of
this
building just wants to make more money only for
this
he did not follow the guidelines. After making the building it took only 5years and the property was destroyed by lackings of proper equipment and open plan design.
This
incident stopped the country for a long time. About 1000 workers gave their lives by falling off the building which was the highest after the independence of Bangladesh.Every year many people visit places to remember those people. With an open system, everyone can make construction but these houses need to follow the rules which were given by the government, And the government should
also
make a rule to control these unusual things which can take community life's and stop their family forever. The architecture should follow a rule which is safe for everyone. Sometimes natural can attacks us as well as owner apartments for
this
every owner have to follow the rules.
For example
, In Pakistan, a building called Rajdhani was made by following the rules but lacking proper equipment, in a natural disease it falls down and by
this
many public lost their lives.
However
, despite some negative reviews, there are
also
some positive overviews today. In 1994 Americans made a bridge called Brooklyn which was made in an open public place with an open plan design. For
this
, the country is able to make money from visitors who came to enjoy the beauty of
this
. They
also
earn money from their work's which takes a positive sight for their country. To conclude, Buildings with an open plan design are harmful but help to increase economic levels.
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