The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The charts below illustrate the proportion of the population ages in
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and these portions of the population ages were
also
predicted in
year
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2050 . The data is calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, it can be seen that in the
year
of
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2000, slightly over half of the population's
age
group
in
Yemen
was below 14
years
old,
while
substantially more than half of
this
group
in Italy was between 15-59
years
old.
However
, the charts in 2050 from both nations were predicted to go in the same direction, that the
60 plus
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age
group
would increase from the
year
of
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2000. It is apparent that the majority
age
group
in
Yemen
was under the
age
of 14
years
, at 51%, followed by the groups of 15-59
years
old and the 60 plus
age
group
, at 46.3% and 3.6% respectively,
while
in Italy, the largest
group
was from 15-59
years
old, at 61,6%.
Then
the
second
largest proportion was from 60 plus and
lastly
from the below
14
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year
old
group
, at 24.1% and 14.3%. The pie charts
also
give the prediction of the percentage of the populations of both countries in the
year
of
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2050. A notable point is that
Yemen
and Italy both have similar forecasts for the
age
group
of 60 plus, which would increase. In
Yemen
, it slightly increased from 3.6% to 5.7%,
while
in Italy it dramatically increased from 24.1% to 42.3%.
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  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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