The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The charts below illustrate the proportion of the population ages in
Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and these portions of the population ages were also
predicted in year
2050 . The data is calibrated in percentage.
Change the article
the year
Overall
, it can be seen that in the year
of
2000, slightly over half of the population's Change preposition
apply
age
group
in Yemen
was below 14 years
old, while
substantially more than half of this
group
in Italy was between 15-59 years
old. However
, the charts in 2050 from both nations were predicted to go in the same direction, that the 60 plus
Add a hyphen
60-plus
age
group
would increase from the year
of
2000.
It is apparent that the majority Change preposition
apply
age
group
in Yemen
was under the age
of 14 years
, at 51%, followed by the groups of 15-59 years
old and the 60 plus age
group
, at 46.3% and 3.6% respectively, while
in Italy, the largest group
was from 15-59 years
old, at 61,6%. Then
the second
largest proportion was from 60 plus and lastly
from the below 14
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14-year-old
year
old group
, at 24.1% and 14.3%.
The pie charts also
give the prediction of the percentage of the populations of both countries in the year
of
2050. A notable point is that Change preposition
apply
Yemen
and Italy both have similar forecasts for the age
group
of 60 plus, which would increase. In Yemen
, it slightly increased from 3.6% to 5.7%, while
in Italy it dramatically increased from 24.1% to 42.3%.Submitted by Immy Knijpstra on
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