Some people believe that success means earning a lot of money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Money has become the definitive form of measurement of

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.

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, the amount of wealth defines the level of

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in modern society.

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, there are other people who believe that self-contentment is the true definition of

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. Even though it is a completely objective matter, I believe both values need to be incorporated

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one

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's life to be able to proclaim that they are successful.

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, modern-day society is the personification of wealth.

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, the size of the house and the brand of the car determines how well a person is going to be perceived in society.

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, the perception of

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is based on the tangible assets that the person holds.

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, people like Jeff Bezos and Elon Musk who are

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of the wealthiest human beings ever lived,

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the most successful residents of planet Earth.

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, my parents whom I see as the happiest couple, nobody considers them even remotely successful.

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, personal happiness is a very contentious topic as it can't be determined exactly what it is. To elaborate, self-happiness often varies between gender, age, income level and even

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the size of the family. And

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the question comes of how happy we are, for which the reply mostly is- fairly happy. But no

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knows the extent of happiness as

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can still be happy despite being

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thousands worth of debt

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others may not be as cheerful even after having a million dollars in

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bank account.

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, I can say I'm happy even though I have a relatively small family and a small rented house,

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, my ex-workmate, who owns a big house and has a large enough family with a big enough income, but I still hear him whinging all the time. In conclusion, there is definitely not

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one size fits all

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answer to

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question, having said that, we do need money as there are things which we can not go without.

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, self-satisfaction is an essential aspect of life that can not be overlooked.

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, both tangible and intangible assets are imperative for anyone to be successful.