In the future, we will have more and more leisure tile as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and at work. Discuss the challenges amd benefits this will bring

It is generally admitted that

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modern life individuals have less leisure because of their hectic

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. No doubt, we will have more free

time

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advancement of technology all the man

work

is done by the different

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of

machines

. In these days,

people

can

compelete

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complete

their

work

at a very fast rate because of telecommunication. Due to

this

, some

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human beings

face provocation and some get benefit from

this

. Let us discuss briefly. To embark upon, unfurling some challenges that

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individuals

face because of the use of

machines

.

First

and foremost, in many industries all the heavy

work

is done by

machines

and the requirement of mankind are reduced. By

this

, many

people

can not able to find another job.

secondly

, the unemployment of the nation could be inclined. According to the survey conducted by

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25% of employees lost their job because of technology.

Finally

, companies can not give more preference to their skilled worker

On the other hand

,there are some benefits of using

machines

.

Firstly

, in many industries

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have to do lots of

work

in minimum

time

but with the help of

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they can complete

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and

fulfill

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customer

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within the

time

limit.

Secondly

,

people

have more

time

because it is not required to do

work

all the

time

since

machines

can do

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everything

.

Thirdly

,

people

can focus on other household

work

and physical activities.

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they can spend more

time

with their families and

also

focus on their

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.

for

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it can be seen that 30% of

people

can help with their families in their

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personal

work

.

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conclusion,

although

there are some challenges that individuals face because job opportunities are reduced

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because

of

machines

but

people

can complete

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of

work

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because

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sometimes

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not

sufficent

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sufficient

to do all the

work

in

time

but technology can do it easily