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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

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Moving away from rural areas towards urban zones is becoming
incresibly
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incredibly
increasingly
nomal
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normal
 in many countries. A huge number of
people
 are choosing big
metropolies
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metropolises
metropolis
 to live in order to improve their
live´s
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 quality.
This
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people
is
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 moving to cities and how
this
 can affect
citie´s
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city's
cities
 public services.
To begin
 with, most rural
people
 choose
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 away because they seek a better life standard that cannot be
achived
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achieved
 where they live. The main cause is that in urban zones, the amount of hospitals or
healt
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health
-care attention
centers
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centres
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 is much more than in the countryside.
Also
, the quality is better because of the fact that it is easier to get
the
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medical
suplies
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supplies
.
For example
, normally if someone has an accident in a
city
, an ambulance normally would need around 15 to 20 minutes in order to arrive at the place while in the rural areas the delay can be up to more than one hour.
Hence
, the probability
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 getting faster health care is higher in the cities than in the
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countryside
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country side
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countryside
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. Something
that is
importat
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important
 to consider is that an
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overcrowded
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overcrowed
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overcrowded
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city
 can create serious problems for the residents as a
concecuense
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consequence
 that some of their public services may collapse . All cities are prepared to hold a certain amount of
people
, when those numbers are
surprased
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surprised
 delays
on
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 the transportation
sistem
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system
 or in the medical
centers
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centres
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 start
apearing
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appearing
. For
intanse
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instance
intense
, the subway
sistem
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system
 from the
city
 where I live, Buenos Aires, can transport 150 persons between stations every 10 minutes. When I started using it two years ago, I always got in the
first
 car that arrived,
however
 nowadays
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 normal that I have to wait
some time
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 until I´m able to get in. In conclusion,
people
 always try to seek
for
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a better quality of life,
as a
result
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people
 are choosing to live in a
city
instead
 of the
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countryside
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country side
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countryside
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.
This
 is something
than
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it
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should be
controled
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controlled
,
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for, otherwise
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otherwise
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 some places can start having problems in their public
sistem
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system
.
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