Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
The bad circumstance of biodiversity has become a widespread concern
for
recent years. There is an opinion that Change preposition
in
the
governments should spend a huge amount of money on preserving wild Correct article usage
apply
animals
. Use synonyms
However
, I disagree with the idea given, because it is possible to exploit resources intelligently to benefit both Linking Words
animals
and Use synonyms
human
population.
The animal conservation project has been highly prioritized in many countries. The Correct article usage
the human
first
convincing reason is the Linking Words
species
Correct quantifier usage
number of species
appear
in Correct pronoun usage
that appear
red
list increase every year. If the extinction of flora and fauna continues, the survival of Correct article usage
the red
human
can be threatened. For Fix the agreement mistake
humans
an
example, if the hunt of Correct article usage
apply
whale
cannot be prevented, the ocean ecosystems will be changed in a negative trend, Fix the agreement mistake
whales
this
may affect the seafood sources on which the communities, especially the fishermen depend for a living. Linking Words
Next
, protecting wild Linking Words
animals
means protecting Use synonyms
the
habitats of Change the word
their
them
like rainforests and Correct pronoun usage
apply
ocean
. If not, climate change will alter our food supplied when Correct article usage
the ocean
the
overpopulation still Correct article usage
apply
continue
. Change the verb form
continues
Therefore
, there will be a shortage of food unless they solve Linking Words
this
problem as soon as possible.
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On the other hand
, money should be spent on Linking Words
welfare
of humankind, certainly. Add an article
the welfare
First
of all, Linking Words
poverty
and homelessness Correct article usage
the poverty
rate
in many undeveloped and developing countries Fix the agreement mistake
rates
increase
dramatically. Let alone many lives are in difficult circumstances and now facing death because of Change the form of the verb
increased
the
starvation and disease. For that reason, the authorities should aid the funds for the underprivileged to overcome Correct article usage
apply
the
adversity and improve the lives of residents. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, wild Linking Words
animals
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
may be
maybe
the most compelling reason Correct your spelling
may be
of
the decrease Change preposition
for
of
agriculture. They eat crops or Change preposition
in
also
leave Linking Words
the
pathogens on plants, which reduce the quantity and efficiency of agricultural products. Correct article usage
apply
Last
but not least, people establish ecotourism destinations in order to prevent endangered species from poaching, but its purpose Linking Words
not
only that. The responsibility of Add a missing verb
is not
this
is creating more jobs for the people Linking Words
such
as biotechnology or environment protection industry.
In conclusion, it is necessary to protect wild Linking Words
animals
. Use synonyms
However
, people should keep Linking Words
balance
the resources allocated for society and wildlifeChange the verb form
balancing
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