Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The bad circumstance of biodiversity has become a widespread concern

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recent years. There is an opinion that

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governments should spend a huge amount of money on preserving wild

animals

.

However

, I disagree with the idea given, because it is possible to exploit resources intelligently to benefit both

animals

and

human

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population. The animal conservation project has been highly prioritized in many countries. The

first

convincing reason is the

species

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appear

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in

red

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list increase every year. If the extinction of flora and fauna continues, the survival of

human

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can be threatened. For

an

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example, if the hunt of

whale

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cannot be prevented, the ocean ecosystems will be changed in a negative trend,

this

may affect the seafood sources on which the communities, especially the fishermen depend for a living.

Next

, protecting wild

animals

means protecting

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habitats of

them

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like rainforests and

ocean

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. If not, climate change will alter our food supplied when

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overpopulation still

continue

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.

Therefore

, there will be a shortage of food unless they solve

this

problem as soon as possible.

On the other hand

, money should be spent on

welfare

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of humankind, certainly.

First

of all,

poverty

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and homelessness

rate

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in many undeveloped and developing countries

increase

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dramatically. Let alone many lives are in difficult circumstances and now facing death because of

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starvation and disease. For that reason, the authorities should aid the funds for the underprivileged to overcome

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adversity and improve the lives of residents.

Secondly

, wild

animals

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maybe

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the most compelling reason

of

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the decrease

of

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agriculture. They eat crops or

also

leave

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pathogens on plants, which reduce the quantity and efficiency of agricultural products.

Last

but not least, people establish ecotourism destinations in order to prevent endangered species from poaching, but its purpose

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only that. The responsibility of

this

is creating more jobs for the people

such

as biotechnology or environment protection industry. In conclusion, it is necessary to protect wild

animals

.

However

, people should keep

balance

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the resources allocated for society and wildlife